im writing an argument paper and need someone to tell me if my introduction sounds good.

my topic is: should poetry be taught more in school?
(intro must include a hook, background info, and a thesis)

Think into the past during your English classes while you were learning poetry. Were the lessons for poetry in-depth? Did they make you think? Or were they just simple things like reading and writing a few poems and answering some questions on famous poems. Lessons about poetry always seem so short and brief. It never feels like kids are being taught in-depth poetry. It’s always just the basics like some of the types of poetry written or why poetry is important. Teachers don’t usually teach the emotional connection poetry has so when kids get up into high school English, they struggle when learning poetry. Some English teachers in high school expect emotional connections to the poems or in-depth poems but since kids aren't taught how to do that throughout Elementary and Middle school, they struggle and can’t do it. Poetry should be taught more in school because there are so many things that poetry does for us, such as helping express emotions and feelings, strengthens overall mental health, and it’s even therapeutic for the writer and reader.

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Answer 1
You should use more formal language, for example kids - children, and use more persuasive language and demanding words, other than that, brilliant!

Related Questions

What information is the author of this cartoon most likely trying to illustrate in the following editorial cartoon:
A.Speak up and voice your concerns.
B.Don't go to a campaign speech unless you agree with the speaker.
C.Shouting is the only way to be heard.
D.Never agree with politicians.​

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A i guess.. hope this helps

Answer:

Speak up and voice your concerns.

Explanation:

Read the sentences from the article "Eileen Collins—NASA's First Female Shuttle Commander to Lead Next Shuttle Mission."

On becoming an astronaut: "When I was very young and first started reading about astronauts, there were no women astronauts." However, she was inspired while she was a child by the Mercury astronauts, and by the time she was in high school and college, new opportunities were opening up for women in aviation.
What is the meaning of the word inspired?

A: influenced

B: optimistic

C: overwhelmed

D: uplifted

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the answer would be A.

Answer:

A. Influenced

Explanation:

Chose the letter of the sentence in which the word in bold-faced is used INCORRECTLY

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Answer: d

Explanation: a prodigy is usually referred to as someone (usually a kid) who is extremely skilled at a particular area/field.

d doesn't make sense because 1. kids aren't obligated to pay bills or get credit cards (unless they're orphans or something) and 2. it doesn't really specify what he's skilled in (but this isn't really a huge issue)

i think the answer is D

Guess who I am.
"girls aren't into me"
"oh Jesus!"
"that will help pay my water bill"
Hint: Twitch steamer

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Answer: Tommy

Explanation: I don't know many streamers so I'm probably wrong.

Toast
He is a among us streamer lol i know it is wrong

The Beginning of Brown

James and Noel sat on the steps of their new house. It was going to be a hot day, but the boys preferred sitting outside to unpacking more boxes inside. Their mom was unpacking kitchen stuff, and the boys had grown tired of hearing her exclaim every time she unwrapped another of the teapots she hadn't seen in months.
"You'd think she'd have enough teapots by now," said James.
"Yeah," said Noel, "I don't get that excited about my Godzilla collection and that is way more interesting than any teapot."
"And I’m sorry," said James, "but I know way too much about teapots for a boy my age."
James then started listing all the things he knew about teapots. "There's the spout and the pouring angle," he began. But Noel had already tuned James out. The heat was rising and as tired as he was of his mother's teapots, he was more tired of James' complaining.
Besides, there was a raggedy old dog down the street. Noel could tell, even from far away, this was a dog that belonged to no one. Its coat was matted. It had no collar. All he could see of the dog's face was its nose sticking out. Its coat was all brown, but a dirty, grayish brown, not the deep dark warm brown that made you feel safe.
"And there's that teapot with the flowers. The brown one with the little dots all in a row," James continued on his rant, now listing all the teapots he had unwrapped for Mom. Noel continued ignoring James and watched the dog.
It was moving slowly in their general direction. It stopped at various spots along the curb to smell things. Sometimes the smelling took a very long time. Every now and then it would sit down to scratch behind its ear. Noel wondered if it was looking for something to eat.
James jabbered on and Noel began to wonder how a dog came to be in such a sad condition as this one. Did no one ever want it? Even as a puppy, was this fellow not cute enough to find a good family? Had it always been this ugly? Hadn't anyone ever been kind to it? The dog was across the street now, one house over. It seemed to be particularly attracted to mailboxes and the plants around them. To Noel's mind, it appeared that the dog was greeting each family on the street.
Noel watched the dog cross the street heading in their direction. He hadn't noticed it before, but the dog's head seemed rather large. It swung back and forth in front of its body, much like the bears Noel had seen at the zoo and on television. Noel could not see any eyes through all the matted hair. He could see gnats and flies hovering over the poor thing, waiting for it to sit down again.
It lumbered toward them. Noel noticed that James had stopped talking. He looked over at his brother. Staring at the dog, James seemed to be a bit shocked or surprised, maybe even stunned.
"What is that?" James whispered.
Instead of sniffing their mailbox and moving on like before, the dog started up the sidewalk toward the steps where they were sitting. Noel could hear the flies buzzing and see not just a few gnats, but a whole swarm around the dog. Bits of leaves and twigs hung in its hair. The dog continued toward them. Was it going to stop, wondered Noel. Should I get up and get in the house? But then, just when Noel felt a twinge of panic, the dog sat down, wagged its tail, and smiled. Noel had never seen anything like it before. It was as if the dog, flies and all, were posing for a photographer. It is going to be an interesting summer, thought Noel.

Part A:

Which of the following best states a key theme of the excerpt "The Beginning of Brown"?

Fill in blank 1 using A, B, or C.
A. Appearances can be deceiving.
B. Friendship overcomes obstacles.
C. Hard work pays off.

Part B:

Select one quotation from the text that supports your answer to Part A. Enter your selection in blank 2 using G, H, or I.
G. Every now and then it would sit down to scratch behind its ear. Noel wondered if it were looking for something to eat.
H. Even as a puppy, was this fellow not cute enough to find a good family? Had it always been this ugly?
I. But then, just when Noel felt a twinge of panic, the dog sat down, wagged its tail, and smiled.

Select one quotation from the text that supports your answer to Part A. Enter your selection in blank 3 using J, K, or L.
J. It was as if the dog, flies and all, were posing for a photographer.
K. Noel could hear the flies buzzing and see not just a few gnats, but a whole swarm.
L. Staring at the dog, James seemed to be a bit shocked or surprised, maybe even stunned

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The awncer is b ya for that
The answer is B if you go back and listen to the story and carefully look at it you will see that the answer is B

Which fact about “Words to Save the World” indicates that it is a biography?

A.
It asks the reader to imagine a future world where there would be no songbirds.

B.
It includes charts and diagrams.

C.
It gives information about the environment.

D.
It tells the story of a person and her accomplishments.

(I'ILL GIVE BRAINLEST IF CORRECT!) PLEASE ANSWER ASAP

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Answer:

D ( It tells a story of a person and her accomplishments )

Explanation:

I took the test already :>

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The fact about “Words to Save the World” which indicates that it is a biography is; Choice D; It tells the story of a person and her accomplishments.

Which fact indicates that “Words to Save the World” is a biography?

It follows from the definition of a biography that a biography is characterized as a piece of writing which tells the story of an individual and his accomplishments.

It therefore follows from the task content that the correct answer choice is Choice D.

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What is the meaning of the word materialize as used in the passage? Use the antonym disappear as a context clue to help you determine the meaning.

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it’s the last option
Option C.

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Should Students get paid to do well?


Writing Situation: The editors of a news magazine for young people want to know what students think about getting paid for doing well in school. They have asked people to write letters supporting or opposing paying students to do well in school. Some of the letters will be published in the next issue of the magazine.

Writing directions: Write a letter to be published in the news magazine for young people. Present an argument as to whether or not students should be paid for doing well in school. Provide reasons and details to support your argument.

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Answer

ok so i guessing they're asking for your opinion on the subject . Do YOU want to be paid for doing good in school? Then, they're asking you to write a letter of your opinion and first open it if you support it or if you oppose the movement of paying students for doing good in school

Help me please ndiiej

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I am pretty sure the answer is B. Hope that helped bestie :)
Answer is b I’m quiet sure

Would you do it for a scobby snack?!
Highlight any signal words that could be used to help identify the text type and underline any other words or phrases that helped you make your decision.
There are several reasons why so many people attend the Olympic games or watch them on television. One reason is tradition. The name Olympics and the torch and flame remind people of the ancient games. People can escape the ordinariness of daily life by attending or watching the Olympics. They like to identify with someone else’s individual sacrifice and accomplishment. National pride is another reason, and an athlete’s or a team’s hard-earned victory becomes a nation’s victory. There are national medal counts and people keep track of how many medals their country’s athletes have won.

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Yes.................................................

Write a few sentences about parts of the poem that help create the overall structure.

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Answer:

poems of industrail age are very helpful for your general knowledge

Explanation:

please help I will mark brainliest I'm failing these class plz

( In the song Firework by Katy Perry identified all of the figurative languages)
plz helpppp

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I didn’t get what is it. Can you explain a bit more?

Explanation:

Onomatopoeia= "Boom, boom, boom"

Metaphor= "Baby, you're a firework,"

Simile= "Do you ever feel, like a plastic bag,"

In the first verse of the song, imagery is used to describe feeling broken down and defeated. For ex, "Do you ever feel so paper thin, like a house of cards, one blow from caving in"

Personification= "Do you ever feel, like a plastic bag, drifting through the wind, wanting to start again" (This verse is both a simile and personification) or you can use "what the future holds"

Alliteration= "Show 'em what you're worth"

Hyperbole= " heart will blow"

Idiom= "Let your colors burst"

Allusion= "House of cards" Allusion to children's game of building houses from playing cards. A symbol for fragility

what does this quote means to you We accept the love we think we deserve.”

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Answer: it means if we think it will help our self esteem than we accept it and say thank you

Explanation:if someone tells u ur awesome and u also think ur awesome than u really are awesome .

I think it means that you shouldn’t lower your standards of love for anybody!

How is the suspense increased by Johnny getting hurt in chapter 6?
1 He may turn against the other greasers.
2 He is now considered a hero.
3 His parents may finally disown him.
4 He may be arrested for killing the Soc.

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The answer is number four
Number four hope that helps

Do you think Pluto should be called a planet or a dwarf planet? Astronomers still disagree on whether or not the “dwarf planet” status given to Pluto is fair. Do some research and come up with three solid reasons why you think Pluto should or should not be deemed as a planet. please respond with 3 valid reasons, thank youu, ill give brainlyiest :D

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Answer:

1. Although pluto is small, it still has mass and value

2. The gravitational pull from pluto has more structure and value than a few other planets on the solar system, Implying that it should indeed be a planet

3. Pluto Can get closer to the moon than Neptune can, and holds value many don't know about, such as several moons, and a whole separate atmosphere

I think pluto should be called a dwarf planet and my 3 reasons are

It doesn’t orbit in a circle like the rest of the planets

It's smaller than any other planet even smaller than Earth's moon.

One of its moons, Charon, is about half Pluto's size.

20. When a novelist uses an allusion in her story, she encourages readers to ask questions about the novel’s themes and characters contrasts her own story with the work of another writer refers to the work of another writer, artist, or musician in her own story provides clues about how the novel’s conflicts will be resolved

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Answer:

Provides clues about how the novels conflicts will be resolved

Explanation:

thx for points

Hope this helps!!

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Which of the following uses repeating vowel sounds?Windy, whooshing weather

If loneliness is a disease, love is the cure

The cold, soulless vacuum of space

Cool, blue, moonlit room

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cool blue moonlit room
It’s cool, blue, moonlit, room

Pls help !!!! In this excerpt from the Emancipation Proclamation, which phrase or sentence supports the claim that President Lincoln did not want the slaves to take up arms against their former masters?

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Answer:

"And i hereby enjoin upon the people..."

Explanation:

It talks about only taking part in violence if they are defending themself.

Write a three-sentence summary of “An Adventure to Remember,” using at least one word from the spelling list in each sentence.

Spelling words:

adventure

literary

structure

construction

respect

unexpected

invention

spectacular

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In the summer of 1935, a kid had gone to visit an uncle who had left Ohio and lived in New York working as an editor, it wasn’t unexpected as he had always been literary. During that summer, the kid’s uncle had taken him on an adventure at the Empire State Building,the tallest skyscraper in the world, Uncle had given his niece/nephew information about the buildings constructions. When they were on an elevator a 1,050 feet up, they were so mesmerized by the structure and view they did not notice they were stuck in the elevator and how dark it was.

write a sentence giving advice to a friend who tends to procrastinate.

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Answer:

You should stop saying "I will get to it later" and just get over with it now. Because once you finish your task as soon as possible you won't have that much pressure on you and you will feel tens times better. Then a big weight will lift off of your shoulders. Trust me with this stop stalling and just do what you said you would do.

Explanation:

you should put off what you want now to do what you need to get done so that you’ll be able to do what you want later. the more you procrastinate, the more work will like up, and the more overwhelming it will be to finish at a later time.

Can someone please send the dreaming black boy poem

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Answer:

I wish my teacher’s eyes wouldn’t

go past me today. Wish he’d know

it’s okay to hug me when I kick

a goal. Wish I myself wouldn’t hold back when answer comes.

I’m no woodchopper now

like all ancestors.

I wish I could be educated

to the best of tune up, and earn

good money and not sink to lick

boots. I wish I could go on every

crisscross way of the globe

and no persons or powers or

hotel keepers would make it a waste.

I wish life wouldn’t spend me out

opposing. Wish same way creation

would have me stand it would have

me stretch, and hold high, my voice

Paul Robeson’s, my inside eye

a sun. Nobody wants to say

hello to nasty answers.

I wish torch throwers of night

would burn lights for decent times.

Wish plotters in pyjamas would pray

for themselves. Wish people wouldn’t

talk as if I dropped from Mars.

I wish only boys were scared

behind bravados, for I could suffer.

I could suffer a big big lot.

I wish nobody would want to earn

the terrible burden I can suffer.

Explanation:

what the other person said

what happens to ha's school in inside out and back again?

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Answer:

Hà is our main girl in Inside Out and Back Again, the poet whose words we read as she goes from enjoying her free time in Saigon to—after much trial and tribulation—finally starting to settle into life in the United States, all thanks to the Vietnam War. She might only be ten years old, but Hà sees a lot in the year this book covers, and it's safe to say that she's wise beyond her years.

Explanation:

Spice

For someone so nice, Hà has a feisty side to her. She likes to compete and feel smart, and when she doesn't, well, she's not exactly one to just sit back and let things slide. So when she is totally annoyed by her brothers, instead of kissing up or making nice in hopes of getting them to treat her better, she writes:

I can't make my brothers

Go live elsewhere,

but I can

hide their sandals.  

It's classic younger sibling behavior, right? We're guessing Hà's not familiar with the old phrase you kill more flies with honey. Considering that they each only have one pair of shoes and it's hot out, this sneaky little scheme becomes a real pain in the foot, so it's no wonder her brothers don't respond by showering her with kindnesses.

The thing about Hà, though, is that she doesn't just act out to get revenge on her pesky older brothers—she does it to feel a sense of power at school, too. For instance, when she is working away on a math problem in school one day, and the siren interrupts her by going off, she tells us:

I'm mad and pinch the girl

who shares my desk.

Tram is half my size,

so skinny and nervous.

Our mothers are friends.

She will tell on me.

She always tells on me.  

It seems like Hà pinches Tram because the siren interrupting her is the last straw in a long line of small moments in which Hà feels powerless, not because Hà is actually mean or anything, though Tram might not agree. So while Hà pesters her brothers in a pretty standard fashion, when she pinches Tram we are reminded that Hà has had more hardship and unfairness than most other children—so much, in fact, that a siren going off during a math problem is enough to make her boil over for a moment.

Sugar

Hà isn't always feisty, however, and she can also be sweet, kind, thoughtful, and observant. For instance, when Khoi's dead (and totally rotting) chick is found and taken from him, he is freaking out and totally depressed. His sister recognizes his pain (instead of, say, being grossed out that he's been hiding a dead chick), and does the following:

I hold his hand:Come with me.

He doesn't resist.

[…]

Inside lies my mouse-bitten doll,

her arms wrapped around

the limp fuzzy body of his chick.

I tie it all into a bundle.

Hà takes her doll—pretty much the only personal belonging she was able to take from Saigon when they left—and she wraps it around the dead chick, then throws the bundle into the ocean. That fact that Hà sacrifices her own comfort object to comfort her brother is a remarkably thoughtful and humble act, and one that shows maturity beyond her ten years. So while she might hide her brothers' shoes, she also really loves them, and is willing to do whatever she can to make sure they know it.

And Everything Nice

Though she has a hard time accepting the incredible changes her life goes through, by the end of the book, things are looking up for Hà. She and her family are in their own home, kids are being nicer to her at school, and she's regained a sense of hope for her future. So though Hà has seen more than her fair share of hardship during the past year, including moving halfway around the world and confirmation of the death of her father, her resilience is undeniable, which should only serve her well going forward.

Which excerpt from Fever 1793 directly reveals a character's thoughts or feelings? Eliza scowled and waved a towel at the flies buzzing above the bowl. "Grandfather says this trouble will soon be over. He says people don’t have gumption anymore." "I’m glad they’ll stop ringing the bells," I said. "A neighbor threatened to burn the place down if the sick are not removed," explained Mr. Carris.

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Answer:

""I’m glad they’ll stop ringing the bells," I said."

Hope That Helps

Explanation:

Hi Army :3

Answer:

The answer is C <3

Explanation:

Please help me I don't understand

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Answer:

1. They will trust that Stylin' Shades offer good eye protection because an eye doctor recommends them.

They will trust the officer

I watch my heart engulfed in burning flame
The colors of my childhood turn to black
I search throughout but find no one to blame
So much of my life I will not get back

The fire moves fast and consumes it all
Table, seats, photo albums, Christmas tree
I sorrow that this misfortune did fall
But it cannot destroy my memory

With everything ash, I have what I need
Your arms around me, the hope in my heart
All my possessions had filled me with greed
I now look forward to another start

Come with me love on a lovely journey
Vagabonds we both shall be—lost and free.

How does the poet's reflection contribute to the central idea of the poem?
A. The poet realizes that he has lost everything and dreads the remaining days of his life.
B. The poet realizes that this is the right time to realize his dream of living the life of a vagabond.
C. The poet realizes that carelessness caused the fire, which resulted in the loss of material things.
D. The poet realizes that people around us are more important than material possessions.

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Answer: D. The poet realizes that people around us are more important than material possessions.

Pls help I will mark brainliest!
(pls make it long)

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Answer:

A long time ago, a Queen ruled over the lands from her wintery castle. Her name was Queen Yuki. She was recently Widowed, her Husband, King Kori, died of Tuberculosis. She was 2 sons and 1 daughter. She was constantly ordering her staff to tend to her needs. One day she and her children were out in the snow to take a trip to the village to greet the people for the Christmas Festival. She spotted her daughter speaking to one of the commoner boys and quickly pulled her back and yelled "THIS IS OUTRAGEOUS, HOW COULD YOU DO SUCH A THING!". The Daughter apologized to her mom and kept by her side the whole time. They eventually got back to the castle and the Queen was thinking of this incident, she remembered how her mom didn't let her speak to one of the commoner boys, and soon she married him and look at her now. She decides to fulfill her Daughter's only chance at true love.

Explanation:

I did my best, I can only write romance stories.

hewp meee pleaseeeeee ill mark brainliest if its right!!!

What comparison can the reader infer from the author’s reference to Mark Twain?

The author is comparing wisdom with inexperience.
The author is comparing complaining with resourcefulness.
The author is comparing doubting with accepting.
The author is comparing riverboat pilots to astronauts.

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The author is comparing wisdom with inexperience if talking about Tom Sawyer

What is the meaning of the word obsolete as used in the passage? Use the antonym current as a context clue to help you determine the meaning.

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Answer:

2nd Option

No longer in use

Explanation:

As,

Obsolete means the things that are no longer produced or used; or are out of date.

Give me a sentence with on of these.

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just one?
she was studying in her room when the door opened suddenly, startling her.

Answer:

I stopped suddenly by the red light.

Directions: Reread the poem and focus on the details and images that tell what people do in the skyscraper at different times of day.
Write a few sentences describing what happens in the building over the course of a day. Be sure to conclude by telling whether and how a skyscraper’s day is similar to a day in the life of a person.

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Answer:

The skyscraper can see everything and everyone, as well as other skyscrapers, as an analogy to humans;friends

Explanation:

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