Make this longer, 500 words please. “Everything is planned out by the government. People don’t have any kind of freedom of choices at all! The givers society is set up in a way that encourages security and independence. The people have no choices or freedom, but they don’t have to worry about collecting adequate resources or meeting basic survival needs because the government has everything planned out for them. To summarize, “ The givers society” is structured in a way that promotes security liberty. People have no freedom or choices, but they don’t have to worry about gathering enough resources or meeting basic survival needs because the government has everything planned out for them.”

Answer:

I'd suggest making each of your points into their own paragraph and then elaborate on them, provide evidence, etc.

For example, in one paragraph list some of the things the gov. plans out in sentence 1, sentence 2 include a quote, then sentence 3 elaborate or explain how the evidence is tied to your claim or point in sentence 1, then sentence 4 summarize the topic of the paragraph. Note it can be more or even less than 4 sentences, it just needs to cover all these details.

Look up ACES format, and try to follow that. It's not too hard to follow, and really adds words while making you sound like you know what you're talking about.

transition words can be extremely helpful for this type of writing too.

also, include an opening paragraph and conclusion paragraph that both summarize your essay as a whole.

Good luck! let me know if you have questions and ill try to help :)

(cl) give 2 ways own opinion


how do we celebrate the season of advent?
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what is false humility? being dishonest with yourself to please others being a people pleaser being honest with yourself telling part of the truth but not the whole truth

Which character is most motivated by traditional moral expectations, even though she is called a “modern woman” in the play?

2. How to vote on election day in 12 easy steps
Step 1: Go to your assigned polling precinct from 6 a.m. to 5 p.m. on May 9
The Commission on Election (Comelec) advises voters to come early and not wait until the last
minute. Look for your name in the voters list posted near the precinct. The Parish Pastoral
Council for Responsible Voting (PPCRV) voter’s assistance desk in the polling place can also help
you look for your precinct, sequence, and room number.
Step 2: Fall in line in the holding area
Step 3: Give your name, valid I.D., and precinct number to the Board of Election Inspectors
(BEIs)
Step 4: Get your ballot, ballot secrecy folder, marker, and go to the voting area
Make sure your ballot is clean of any marks.
Step 5: Vote wisely
Under voting and abstaining is allowed; overvoting is not. If you overvote, the vote will not be
counted. Shade the entire oval corresponding to your candidate of choice. Cover your ballot
using the ballot secrecy folder; even the poll watchers and BEI cannot look at your ballot. Do
not make any other marks on the ballot.

the subject of something you read

"goes a long way toward achieving our goal" affect this passage?
A. The phrase adds a lighthearted tone, making the passage less serious.
B.The phrase strengthens the author's tone of expertise, making the information persuasive.
C. The phrase adds factual information, making the tone of the passage more objective.
D. The phrase creates an informal tone that makes the passage more reader-friendly.

The excerpt from In the Time of Butterflies is written mainly in ____________ tense, from a(n) ____________ point of view.

Question 14 options:


a)


past; first-person


b)


present; first-person


c)


past; third-person


d)


present; third-person

how does the speaker in the seafarer feel about life at sea

SOMEONE PLEASEEE HELPPP!!!\

Island life offers the best of all worlds. Take Lummi Island, for example, the smallest of the San Juan Islands in northwest Washington and still a well-kept secret. Though its meager population quadruples to 4,000 with the summer tourist season, it never feels the slightest bit crowded. One can always find a deserted beach to roam or a forest path to explore. The mainland is only a 12-minute ferry ride away, so city life is within reach. Bainbridge Island, near Seattle, is another prime choice for those wishing to live somewhere with peace and quiet but proximity to a city. Many Seattle employees live on the island and commute each day to their downtown jobs. Vashon Island, near Tacoma, might seem too small for some. There is no "town" to speak of, but a quiet little artists' community thrives there.
Family homes on the islands mentioned above are no more expensive than on the mainland. Such houses offer stellar views of surrounding landscape, including mountains, waterways, and other scenic islands. Otter, bald eagles, seals, and even whales are frequent visitors to Pacific coastal islands. They are a nature lover's paradise and also offer perfect settings for stargazers and photographers. Quite a few island inhabitants were once tourists who found they couldn't bear to leave and made the island their home.
If there are drawbacks, they are only these: there is usually a minimum of culture in terms of theater or music events. But all that means is an excursion into town now and then to get your fix. The same is true if you want a wide variety of food or like to eat in restaurants. The only other minor drawback is the ferry schedule, which can be sporadic. There are also periods of time each year when ferries are in "dry dock" and not running due to planned or unplanned repairs. Still, for those wanting to escape the noise and stress of city life, islands are a perfect choice. They are among the nation's few remaining unspoiled places to call home.

Which sentence best summarizes the author's attitude in this selection?
A.
There is no "town" to speak of, but a quiet little artists' community thrives there.
B.
But all that means is an excursion into town now and then to get your fix.
C.
Still, for those wanting to escape the noise and stress of city life, islands are a perfect choice.
D.
Many Seattle employees live on the island and commute each day to their downtown jobs

Help me! pls, i don’t know to doing the exercise

Use personification to describe a waffle.
(this is for my little brother, and we need help ASAP!!!!!)
for brainliest, 5 stars, and thanks!!!

What summary would you give me for the chocolate touch?

the idea that a supernova is preceded by a huge burst of neutrinos is

I. Choose the word whose main stress pattern is not the same as that of the others:
1. A. castle B. argue C. pretend D. dungeon
2. A. luggage B. suitcase C. carousel D. passport
3. A. convenient B. selection C. interesting D. equipment
4. A. percussion B. mystery C. cultural D. musical

Any ideas for this…?

Which word from Juliet's conversation with her mother is understood one
way by Lady Capulet and another way by the audience?

A. Cousin
B. Heart
C. Temper
D. Love

The tradition of birthday parties started a long time ago. People thought there was a special danger from evil spirits on birthdays;(1) ___________, friends and family came together to bring good thoughts and wishes and even presents. There are some (2) ______traditions in different countries around the world.In Vietnam, on a child’s first birthday, family members put many things on the floor around the child for him or her to choose. (3) ______ to tradition, the first thing the child picks up will tell us his or her future job. In some countries, (4) ______ 21st birthday cake is sometimes in a shape of a key. The key (5) _______ that the young person is now old enough to leave and build up to their own family at any

the BCG vaccine is used to us against a disease name the disease answer in sentence​

I could have sworn MY EARS WERE BURNING this morning. Find the correct answer that describes the true meaning of the idiom

Anyone know to know they are hiring?? (Job) how to application to restaurant, pizza, kfc, starbuck, food 4 less ( fast food, Grocery....)

To create a 'new normal' we need to invest much more in:
Answer in 6 words

In a soliloquy, other characters on stage can hear the inner most thoughts of the main character speaking ( true or false )

Why shouldn’t the same sex marriage be allowed for my debate speech on Friday

Which excerpt best reveals Edna’s doubts about Robert’s feelings for her in chapter 33 of The Awakening? "Mrs. Pontellier! How do you happen—oh! how well you look! Is Mademoiselle Reisz not here? I never expected to see you." "When did you come back?" asked Edna in an unsteady voice, wiping her face with her handkerchief. So he had come back because the Mexicans were not congenial . . . because of any reason, and not because he cared to be near her. A hundred times Edna had pictured Robert's return, and imagined their first meeting. It was usually at her home, whither he had sought her out at once.

Directions:
As you read, highlight important passages.
Annotate each chunk (main idea, agree/disagree, or connection)
Answer questions on page 2
House on Mango Street by Sandra Cisneros
We didn't always live on Mango Street. Before that we lived on Loomis on the third floor, and before that we lived on Keeler. Before Keeler it was Paulina, and before that I can't remember. But what I remember most is moving a lot. Each time it seemed there'd be one more of us. By the time we got to Mango Street we were six—Mama, Papa, Carlos, Kiki, my sister Nenny and me.
Chunk 1 annotation:


The house on Mango Street is ours, and we don't have to pay rent to anybody, or share the yard with the people downstairs, or be careful not to make too much noise, and there isn't a landlord banging on the ceiling with a broom. But even so, it's not the house we'd thought we'd get.
Chunk 2 annotation


We had to leave the flat on Loom is quick. The water pipes broke and the landlord wouldn't fix them because the house was too old. We had to leave fast. We were using the washroom next door and carrying water over in empty milk gallons. That's why Mama and Papa looked for a house, and that's why we moved into the house on Mango Street, far away, on the other side of town.
Chunk 3 annotation


They always told us that one day we would move into a house, a real house that would be ours forever so we wouldn't have to move each year. And our house would have running water and pipes that worked. And inside it would have real stairs, not hallway stairs, but stairs inside like the houses on TV. And we'd have a basement and at least three washrooms so when we took a bath we wouldn't have to tell everybody. Our house would be white with trees around it, a great big yard and grass growing without a fence. This was the house Papa talked about when he held a lottery ticket and this was the house Mama dreamed up in the stories she told us before we went to bed.
Chunk 4 annotation


But the house on Mango Street is not the way they told it at all. It's small and red with tight steps in front and windows so small you'd think they were holding their breath. Bricks are crumbling in places, and the front door is so swollen you have to push hard to get in. There is no front yard, only four little elms the city planted by the curb. Outback is a small garage for the car we don't own yet and a small yard that looks smaller between the two buildings on either side. There are stairs in our house, but they're ordinary hallway stairs, and the house has only one washroom. Everybody has to share a bedroom—Mama and Papa, Carlos and Kiki, me and Nenny.
Chunk 5 annotation


Once when we were living on Loomis, a nun from my school passed by and saw me playing out front.
The laundromat downstairs had been boarded up because it had been robbed two days before and the owner had painted on the wood YES WE'RE OPEN so as not to lose business.
Where do you live? she asked.
There, I said pointing up to the third floor.
You live there? There. I had to look to where she pointed—the third floor, the paint peeling, wooden bars Papa had nailed on the windows so we wouldn't fall out. You live there? The way she said it made me feel like nothing. There. I lived there. I nodded.

I knew then I had to have a house. A real house. One I could point to. But this isn't it. The house on Mango Street isn't it. For the time being, Mama says. Temporary, says Papa. But I know how those things go.

Chunk 6 annotation


House on Mango Street Questions
Directions: Answer the following questions in complete sentences.
Where did the narrator live before she moved to The House on Mango Street?
How were her previous homes different?
In what kind of house would she like to live?
Discuss what the narrator’s view of a home is. What makes a house a home? Is the narrator satisfied with her house? Does she feel that she belongs there? Explain.

In describing her house, or where she lives, what does Esperanza convey about her self-identity? How does the description of her home affect the way she sees the world?
Make a connection: How is this vignette similar to or different than your life? Explain. What does it remind you of?

what does the chest most likely symbolize in this story?

\Which of these best combines the ideas in the group of sentences above to make an interesting sentence?

what comes once in a year twice in a month 4 times in a week and 6 times in a day

which accounts for the highest water withdrawals in the united states

PLS HURRY LESS THAN 5 MIN Which elements are least likely to be used by an author to develop an idea in a personal narrative?
A.
situation and conflict
B. descriptions and reflection
C.
dialogue and interaction the
D.
research and statistics