Part C
Review your draft for pacing and sentence variety. Choose one sentence to revise either the pacing or sentence structure. In the space provided, list your original sentence, the revision, and an explanation of why you chose to revise that sentence.

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Answer 1

Answer:

i don't get why you needed help when you did it correctly which btw, good job.

Explanation:

Answer 2
ok so i don’t really know what yu mean but if yu really put your mind into it, it will get yu thinking n then yu will answer it

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Kindly Find attached project request and need best project

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it won’t show the project for me, but i bet you did good :D
it doesn’t show the pic, but i’m sure you did great!

What is a good example of a hook for a paragraph about deer?

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I’m not sure on examples but say something that will grab someone attention and have them wanting to know more. Ex: Did you know that deers are such and such or anything about deers that someone wouldn’t randomly know.
Is it informational?

What happens at the end of "Sorry, wrong number"?

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Answer:

The drama ends when the police ask about the nature of the caller's emergency. The killer picks up the phone, explains that he's fine, and says that he never meant to dial the police. He apologizes for dialing a wrong number and hangs up.

Explanation:

i hope i helped you

can we be friends?

Question 1 of 10
Which sentence is punctuated correctly?
O A. The coffee break the two scholars took although very brief, ended
up being the most important 15 minutes of their day, for it was
then that they had the biggest breakthrough of their research,
B. The coffee break the two scholars took, although very brief, ended
up being the most important 15 minutes of their day, for it was
then that they had the biggest breakthrough of their research.
O C. The coffee break the two scholars took, although very brief ended
up being the most important 15 minutes of their day, for it was
then that they had the biggest breakthrough of their research.
D. The coffee break, the two scholars took, although very brief ended
up being the most important 15 minutes of their day, for it was
then that they had the biggest breakthrough of their research.
SUBMIT

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Answer: B

Explanation: in A the ending is not correct

                      in C the comma is missing in between brief and ended

                      in D, its same same as C

The coffee break the two scholars took, although very brief, ended up being the most important 15 minutes of their day, for it was then that they had the biggest breakthrough of their research. Hence option B is correct.

What is punctuation?

The set of symbols we use to distinguish and express the meaning of written phrases and sentence fragments is known as punctuation. Punctuation adds silent intonation to our work.

A's conclusion is incorrect, C's comma between brief and finished is missing, and D's error is the same as C's only option C is correctly punctuated sentence.

Thus, the coffee break the two scholars took, although very brief, ended up being the most important 15 minutes of their day, for it was then that they had the biggest breakthrough of their research. Hence option B is correct.

To learn more about punctuation, refer to the link below:

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Read this paragraph from I Never Had It Made.

Branch Rickey lost that fight, but when he became the boss of the Brooklyn Dodgers in 1943, he felt the time for equality in baseball had come. He knew that achieving it would be terribly difficult. There would be deep resentment, determined opposition, and perhaps even racial violence. He was convinced he was morally right, and he shrewdly sensed that making the game a truly national one would have healthy financial results. He took his case before the startled directors of the club, and using persuasive eloquence, he won the first battle in what would be a long and bitter campaign. He was voted permission to make the Brooklyn club the pioneer in bringing blacks into baseball.

What is the author’s purpose for including this paragraph?

to inform readers about Branch Rickey’s professional career
to inform readers about Branch Rickey’s determination

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The author’s purpose for including this paragraph is to inform readers about Branch Rickey’s determination
to inform his readers of hi determination

How do the settings of Stave I and Stave III establish different moods?

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Because depending on the where they are might change there mood

Question 8 of 10
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Choose the correct answer. A story that a writer invents is called a ___ story.

A) TRUE

B) historical

C) fictional

D) nonfictional

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C) fictional

we know this because nonfictional means that it was not created based on imagination and historical means it’s an event that has most definitely happened.

Answer:

D) nonfictional.?

If and when the team wins the championship, we will have a celebration.

The underlined word is if and when. They want me to change it to something else that could also mean "if and when"

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Answer:

the answer is if its if its if

Synonyms for word if: (as long as
assuming (that)
on condition (that)
on the assumption (that)
provided (that)
supposing (that)
unless
with the condition (that)

And synonyms for when:

albeit.
although.
at.
at the same time.
during.

Hope it helps

How do the words used to describe the speaker's examination and reaction to the shark contribute to the tone of the passage?

Poem: Twice I walked With Dinosaurs
One summer we found
a dead baby shark
washed up on the beach,
cut it open with a dinner knife
from the house,
and performed an
outdoor autopsy
As we marveled at its
miniature anatomy,
reveled in the smallness
of each little organ,
seagulls circled overhead.
The ocean was quiet,
barely making waves.
It kept vigil for its tiny causality.

The spring prior,
an alligator wandered
onto the beach during my
uncle’s second wedding.
It was far enough away
to merit an absence of fear, but
nobody took photos or said
a word— we just stared
as it settled itself in the surf,
hoping to be cleansed.

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Answer:

Hello

Explanation:

The writer puts an emphisis on how marvelously small everyrthing is inside the baby shark, which correlate with the second passage by telliung us about the time an alligator walked to his uncles second wedding (which correlates to the story as is the second time he saw a "dinosaur") on the same beach. This shows us that this world truly is small or what not.

Answer: Once someone found a dead baby shark on the beach. After he brought it in the house he began to examinate his organs.Than some seaguls came at the house to try to eat the shark.After that,the ocean was so calm that it barely did any waves.

The killer clowns Chapter 3
One week after Rosa’s death, the clowns had the world completely under their control.


Estella had just heard the news of Rosa’s death and was devastated. “Oh Rosa,” Estella cried, looking forlorn “Why did you have to mess with Pennywise?” Then she went to a dusty trunk in the corner “I vowed never to open this chest ever again… but I have to save Rosa.” Estella pulled out a dusty spell book and set it on the table. She flipped to the page about bringing people back to life. “The blood of the killer poured into the mouth of the killed shall raise the dead man from his earthy bed.” Estella read. She went to Pennywise’s lair and collected a little bit of his blood.


Later, at the graveyard, Estella was pouring the blood of Pennywise into Rosa’s mouth. Rosa immediately opened her eyes, while her arms grew back, “Estella, where am I? what happened?” Rosa said, looking around. “Rosa, you must kill Pennywise, before EVERYONE dies!” “Ok,” said Rosa “ I will try.” Rosa then went home and gathered her weapons, put her brass knuckles on, and went to Pennywise’s lair.

When she got there, Rosa started to have second thoughts, but she kept on moving. There was blood splattered across the walls, dismembered body parts all over the place, and torture devices on a stage in the far corner. But she kept moving till she got to Pennywise’s throne. “HEY, PENNYWISE” Rosa yelled “ YOU ARE SO UGLY THAT WHEN YOU WERE BORN, THE DOCTOR SLAPPED YOUR MOTHER.” “Rosa” Pennywise snarled “didn’t I kill you already?” Rosa then conjured a whirlwind around her and flew to Pennywise, “yeah and you will have to do it again” she said and then stabbed Pennywise in the heart, took out all of the clowns, and saved anymore innocent people from a cruel death for the clowns entertainment.


the end or is it?

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bro? why you posting a clown story

did you write this cause if so good job like i love the story so much

pls help, i am horrible with poems

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Answer:

Explanation:

Go back in time 2019 were everything was better

Until the world started dying and we all stared lying

Saying were ok will live in space

Instead of fixing the problem we face

I just made that up. Wow. Um good luck ask me if you need a different poem .

That’s perfect honestly I think that should be all you need turn it in :)

A book about magic spells that can change a pencil into gold is considered __________.

A) fictional, because pencils cannot change into gold

B) fictional, because there are no such things as pencils

C) nonfictional, because it is not make-believe

D) historical fictional, because it has real people and events

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Answer:

A

Explanation: the answer would be a because it is not physically possible for a pencil to change to gold.

A) fictional, because pencils cannot change into gold.

1 sentence using had to

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Answer:

I had to clean my room before going to the movies.

Explanation:

:))

I had to wash dishes before I went to sleep

Summarizing information text I-ready Lesson 2 pages 13-18

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Answer:

Summarized your imformation

Explanation:

do you have a picture?

"In America, the freedom ain't free In America, got soldiers dyin' overseas So America, we say what we believe My America, I won't ever take a knee Our freedom is the reason you can't disrespect our flag If my stars and stripes offend you, then I'll help you pack your bags"

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Where the questions???

Answer:

We should all appreciate our soldiers and heroes and donate to Tunnel To Towers, a non-profit

Explanation:

No explanation is needed for it.  

Here is a letter sent by a mother of a soldier.

Dear Soldier,

It's hard to thank someone for giving me the freedom to live the life God has so graciously given to me.

Thank you for everything you do daily to protect this country, and for that I am forever grateful. You have given up so much for this country, and I personally believe that is something that cannot be repaid. Most soldiers I know believe having a free country is payment enough. I think that's what makes you all so great, you give so much and do not expect anything back. I recognize the selflessness you've demonstrated with your willingness to serve our country.

Thank you for all your hard work and dedication. It is no secret that your training, or any part to being a soldier is easy. I always knew it was a lot of work, but I never realized how much it really was until my my son joined the US Army.

Thank you for your bravery, strength, hard work, commitment, dedication and willingness to do the hard things that are required of you day in and day out. You've given up everything to fight for US, that is something I don't take lightly. So, thank you for everything that you do.

God Bless you & may God Bless America,

A PROUD mother of a US Solider

can someone pls help me compare and contrast the two poems, we real cool and the mending wall

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Answer:

I dont really  understand the question if u make another one with more detail ill help u

Explanation:

I can help you give me the name of each poem

I saw their starved lips in the gloam

3) In this line from the poem, what does the phrase starved lips suggest?

A) They are hungry for love.
B) They are lonely and need more attention.
C) They cannot speak and are mute, so their lips are starved.
D) Their lips are colorless because the blood has drained from their faces

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Answer:

D) Their lips are colorless because the blood has drained from their faces

Explanation:

I did it before and got it right

Answer:

The answer A, because this happens sometimes when people often brake up

Explanation:

Write a short narrative including EACH of the following words. Be sure to use imagery to describe the atmosphere, tone, mood, and experience.
PRESIDENT * FLOWERS * WHITE HOUSE * HIGH HEELS
PLS WRITE 2 PARAGRAPHS

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Once in a Town there was a man with a semi-poor family, the mans name was Daniel Burch. Daniel loved the nature and everyday when he was finished playing outside he would always bring his mother a flower from his neighbors crops. Daniel neighbor, Mr. Finley was a retired Business man and he would tell Daniel all about his work. Daniel loved how Mr. Finley's job sounded so he made it a priority to have a job like Mr. Finley's and he did but slightly better. When Daniel was in his mid High School years he discovered an interest in politics. Daniel would study Politics all the time. After high school, Daniel went to college and studied politics and after that he got a job that he absolutely loved which he worked for so many years.

Years later, Daniel was still working with politics, he had a family of his own that he spoiled. He was always on high heels about somethings but he wanted his family to have a good life and always have what they wanted. One day Daniel and his wife was just laying down and he had an idea to run for president. He thought it would be good for him and his family. Daniel had it all planned out, so he told his wife and she supported him 100%. So Daniel ran for president and with sometime he won. Daniel and his family celebrated and then a little while later they got there things together to move into there new Home, The White House.

Choose one of the persuasive writing prompts from the list below and write an essay. A certain number of prompts have model essays in the answer section that you can use to compare and con- trast your writing. A scoring guide, or rubric, is also included in the answer section. You can use this guide to give you an idea of the way your essay may be graded. If you have trouble interpreting the scoring guide, see a teacher or professor for help.

Can you please help me answer the questions down below. Pease read the text below to help you. Thank you so much!




2. How well does Sassoon think the war is being run? Provide quotes to help explain your view.

3. What is Sassoon's attitude towards the war, as shown in this extract? Provide quotes to support your view.

4. How realistic is Sassoon's portrayal of England? Explain your answer.

5. Why is Sassoon thinking of England in this situation?

6. Give three examples of poetic techniques which have been used in this excerpt. Explain their effect on the reader.

7. Based on the evidence in both extracts, what do you think a dug-out is?​

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Answer:

Explanation:

I’m in science class right now. What a coincidence!!!!

Plz help answer the question below best answer brainliest

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Answers first haha The answer is something you’ll have to find it out
It’s A

Explanation: because it is telling us that kids before do more outdoor activities then we do these days and kids are playing inside more than they used to.

rephrase this for me plz for 100 points
(it can be 2-3 or more sentence plz help asap)
(also plz put effort and plz dot answer if your not actually
gonna answer it because this important)



Pandas play a crucial role in China's bamboo forests by spreading seeds and helping the vegetation to grow. So by saving pandas, we will also be saving so much more. We will be helping to protect not only these unique forests but also the wealth of species that live in them.The panda’s habitat is also important for the livelihoods of local communities, who use it for food, income, fuel for cooking and heating, and medicine. And for people across the country.

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Answer:

pandas are very important in china they help grow food and create more space by eating bamboo. so by helping pandas we would be helping alot of panda located areas such as china with food, income, fuel and medicine.

Answer:

Pandas really help spread seeds and they help plants grow. If we save pandas, we will also save other species and people who use the food from their habitat.

TRICK QUESTION TIME!!!! whoever gets em all correct gets brainliest
What can be broken but never held?

What two things can you never eat for breakfast?

The more there is, the less you see. What am I?

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Answer:

A promise

Lunch and Dinner

Darkness

Explanation:

Answer:

Your heart or a Promise

Lunch and Dinner

Darkness

Explanation:

I'm smart, thank you.

Refer to your Expeditions in Reading book for a completo version of this text.
Read the excerpt from "Go, John Glenn!"
He thought of astronaut Alan Shepard, strapped into his capsule, waiting for launch a year earlier. "Why don't you
fix your little problem ... and light this candle?" Shepard had asked Mission Control, Glenn smiled at the memory.
Which response best describes the excerpt?
A writer provides a secondhand account of the Friendship 7 mission.
It is a firsthand description of Glenn's first trip into space,
It is a secondhand account of Shepard's words to Mission Control as he waited to launch
Shepard provides a firsthand account of the problems that had to be addressed before take-off.

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Answer:

the first choice

Explanation:

this is english not maths i dont think this even needs an explanation

Students in Mrs. Dominique's geography class are writing research papers about different countries. What is the first step the students should take as they begin writing a research paper?

select a topic and ask an essential question
gather information
develop a thesis statement
cite your sources

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answer a-select a topic and ask an essential question.
You cannot do research if you do have a specific topic. the essential question helps you to narrow down information to find specifics about what it is that you are learning.

Answer:

The other guy is right i think (a)

Explanation:

BEST OF LUCK AND HAVE A GREAT DAY!!!!!!!!!!

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25 POINTS!!! WILL MARK BRAINLIEST! Help I don’t have enough time to finish this assignment I just need to answer this one question! Thanks and sorry ❤️

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Answer:3Rd to last line to the extended radius

Explanation:The sonnet describes the majestic litresture he has structured.

I choose the line where the stars in secret influence comment. I think it means that men depend on fate and now their own self. Due to this they pick words to fulfill their believed destiny growing further away as all prophecies and destiny as self-fulfilling in time.

1. What are 2 meanings for might? 2. What are two meanings for entrance? Help me please.

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Answer:

maybe and tryjdndndbdbhdjdjdjdjdjdjd

It's about the Triangle Fire story, Please answer ASAP. Lines 223–239: Which sentence states the main idea in this passage? What details support that idea?

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Answer:

oof

Explanation:

i tried to find it online but it says i cant open it sryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

Answer:SORRY

Explanation:CANT OPEN

What can we do with points? Please answer:)

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Answer:

You can use your points to post a question. That's basically it lol

you use points to give a person whenever they answer your question :) the more points you use on a question, the faster it will be answered

What can you connect from chapter 6 of the book A Long Walk To Water
PLS help it is due in half an hour

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Answer:

nyas family is living in a constant fear, nyas mother is terrified that dinka tribesmen will harm her son and her husband. luckily, no one has been harmed yet.

Explanation:

Answer: im not sure if this is the answer

Explanation:

i need help please would it be C or D?

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Answer:

I think it's D

Explanation:

hope it helps

Answer:

D. A label on the bottle invites Alice to drink from it, but she hesitates.

Explanation:

The passage, in summary, describes a bottle with a label that's telling Alice to drink it. However, Alice wasn't going to do it immediately, and she double checks if it's poison or not.

Based on the summary above, we can say that option D. best matches with our summary, making it the correct answer.

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