Read the following paragraph and select the answer which states its weaknesses. "Three years back, I visited my uncle in the summer vacation. In his village, there is a big and lovely pond with lotus and lily flowers in it. I learnt how to swim there. My uncle's only son Nits is of my age and an expert swimmer. Nits can also skate, ride a bicycle, and hike up mountains for days. The mountain in their village is gorgeous too. Nits taught me the art of swimming. The pond is shallow near the banks. The first day of the exercise was really very unpleasant, so I was reluctant to go to the pond the next day. Because on the first day, I gulped a lot of water, sank a couple of times, and some water entered my nose as well. However, Nits persuaded me to continue, and soon I began to enjoy swimming. " *
5 points
Has many grammatical & spelling errors
Lacks sufficient specific details
Lacks unity as not on topic in 2 sentences
Lacks logical order of support
Which of the following should you NOT think carefully about when completing a scratch outline? *
5 points
the point that you are making
the supporting items you have to strengthen your point
the details to add in each paragraph
the order in which you will place those details
After you have completed the prewriting stage, what step should you move onto? *
5 points
Completing your first draft
Revising your ideas in the prewriting stage.
Preparing a scratch outline
Writing your final essay
What does the clustering, diagramming, or mapping prewriting technique use circles/boxes, and arrows for? *
5 points
To show ideas of chorological order.
To show the relationship among the listed ideas.
To show visual representation of the ideas that easily memorized.
To show visual representation of unrelated ideas.

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Answer 1

Answer:

this is a lot and the answers are in the paragraph READ

Explanation:


Related Questions

Help me!?!!!?!?
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They could get a beach house, so that they have access to a beach view, a pool, and a garden.

Alternatively, they could live in the top level of an apartment where they have gardens. There are usually pools in those areas, too.

Claim #1: Zoos are a great way to educate the public about animals
and their needs.
Claim #2: Zoos are an inhumane way to provide people with
entertainment
Which piece of evidence best supports claim #1?
O A. There are only 45 mammal species that have been bred in
captivity successfully.
O B. When the Springville Zoo shut down, it re-homed 800 animals at
other zoos.
O C. Most zoos provide large mammals with only 300 square feet to
roam within their enclosure.
O D. Last year, zoo visitors donated over $1.3 million to protect
endangered animals.
SUBMIT

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Answer:

D

Explanation:

Answer:

D

Explanation:

Directions: You have just read some poems that use nature as a symbol for something else; in this case, the characteristics of human beings. If you had to choose something in nature to symbolize who you are and your characteristics, what would it be? A plant? An animal? A body of water? The mountains or the desert? There are many choices. Think about your personality, choose one thing from nature that best symbolizes who you are, and then use the Text Editor to write a paragraph about it. Before you begin, brainstorm some ideas. In what ways are you and the thing you chose to symbolize yourself similar? Use vivid descriptions and details so that the reader will have a very clear understanding of why you and your symbol in nature are so similar. This paragraph must contain at least 150 words or more. As always, check your writing thoroughly for spelling, grammar, and punctuation.

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Answer:

thanks bubs i needed sum points:)))

Explanation:

Please help with all of them, 40 points

please don’t comment just for points. Because I can report and you can get banned.

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Answer:

1. trucks

2. toy poodle

3. jerry

4. macy's

5. in that movie

6. bald eagle

7. a spitfire

8. benito grasselli

9. joyce

10. min

11. finished the hole

12. michelle

13. porsche

14. the car

15. dale

disclaimer!!!: i don't know what grade this is, but i am in 9th grade and i answered these to the best of my knowlegde!!( i am also in honors english) p.s. good luck! :)

Punctuate the following sentence correctly using commas, semicolons, or colons.

I was looking through the attic at grandma's house and I found a letter signed by President Ronald Reagan.

A. I was looking through the attic; at grandma's house, and I found a letter signed by President Ronald Reagan.

B. I was looking through the attic, at grandma's, house and I found a letter signed by President Ronald Reagan.

C.I was looking through the attic at grandma's house, and I found a letter signed by President Ronald Reagan.

D.I was looking through the attic at grandma's house; and I found a letter signed by President Ronald Reagan.

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Answer:

C

Explanation:

this is the only one that makes sense, hope it helps :)

c

explanation: the comma is in the right place

1. What do folk tales and fables have in common?​

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Answer:

They often tend to deal with similar fantastical subjects, and often both have moral lessons.

Explanation:

Answer:

Many people consider folktales and fables as part of the same body of tales which forms the oral and written heritage of a culture. They often tend to deal with similar fantastical subjects, and often both have moral lessons.

Explanation:

Summer, an excerpt
by Amy Lowell

Some men there are who find in nature all
Their inspiration, hers the sympathy
Which spurs them on to any great endeavor,
To them the fields and woods are closest friends,
And they hold dear communion with the hills;
The voice of waters soothes them with its fall,
And the great winds bring healing in their sound.
To them a city is a prison house
Where pent up human forces labour and strive,
Where beauty dwells not, driven forth by man;
But where in winter they must live until
Summer gives back the spaces of the hills.
To me it is not so. I love the earth
And all the gifts of her so lavish hand:
Sunshine and flowers, rivers and rushing winds,
Thick branches swaying in a winter storm,
And moonlight playing in a boat's wide wake;
But more than these, and much, ah, how much more,
I love the very human heart of man.
Above me spreads the hot, blue mid-day sky,
Far down the hillside lies the sleeping lake
Lazily reflecting back the sun,
And scarcely ruffled by the little breeze
Which wanders idly through the nodding ferns.
The blue crest of the distant mountain, tops
The green crest of the hill on which I sit;
And it is summer, glorious, deep-toned summer,
The very crown of nature's changing year
When all her surging life is at its full.
To me alone it is a time of pause,
A void and silent space between two worlds,
When inspiration lags, and feeling sleeps,
Gathering strength for efforts yet to come.

Which of the following best describes the speaker in "Summer"? (5 points)

Appreciative of both humans and nature

In love with everything and everyone

Proud of human accomplishments but disrespectful of nature

Reconciled to the importance of nature but attached to cities

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Answer:

Appreciative of Both Humans and Nature

Explanation:

read the poem

How can cell phones help you?

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Answer:

I will just write a dumb 3 paragraphs on that. Please help trying to get Brainliest.

Explanation:

    Cell phones are now everywhere. Over half the world's population has one and the developing world has largely skipped over land lines and gone straight to mobile devices. In Tanzania, 97 percent of people have access to a cell phone, while only 27 percent have access to a land line. In India, more people have a cell phone than have access to toilets. The proliferation of this technology brings many benefits.

    With cell phones in the hands of so many people, information can spread quickly and having such an easy means of communication lets groups of people mobilize like never before. Environmental activism is now just a few buttons away. And now that smart phones make up a large chunk of the cell phones being used worldwide, people and organizations have even greater tools for environmentalism at their fingertips.

    Armed with apps, a camera, accessories and the ability to quickly communicate with people anywhere, cell phones can turn anyone into an eco-warrior. Here are five areas in which cell phones are being used to help the environment.

In the sentence "mr. jones is planning to take a trip to cody, wyoming which lies near yellowstone national park" the following words should be capitalized.

A. Jones, Wyoming, National Park

B. Mr., Jones, Cody, Wyoming, Yellowstone National Park

C. Mr. Jones, Cody, Wyoming

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B. Mr.Jones, Cody, Wyoming, Yellowstone National Park

1. Why are humans inclined to respond to people, objects, or events with praise, mockery, or mourning?​

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Because of the acceleration of body

The term praise refer to the recognition of the person by provide which some kind of awards or rewards it will be the positive attitude in the person mind and feels happy .

The correct answer will be as we all know the nature of the human is very expressive , the expression changes according to the situation .

Explanation :

The Human was made up of full of emotion and the feelings changed according to time , like if he is feelings happy then it will be visible on the face by smile and in same way if he feel sad or upset .

As in same way the mockery when some laugh at you or you laugh on someone , it definitely hurts the feeling of the person and make the the person upset .

why being expressive is important?

An expressive allow the person to communicate on emotional level and these type of expressive language includes  sign language or written language.

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In one or two sentences, explain why a presenter would want to use audio as a media form. (2 points)

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Answer:

which type

Explanation:

Answer: Speakers what to use audio so that every can hear them

Explanation: duh

ead the excerpt from "Paul Revere's Ride.”

He said to his friend, "If the British march
By land or sea from the town to-night,
Hang a lantern aloft in the belfry arch
Of the North Church tower as a signal light,--
One if by land, and two if by sea;
And I on the opposite shore will be,
Ready to ride and spread the alarm
Through every Middlesex village and farm,
For the country folk to be up and to arm."

Who is speaking in this excerpt?

Paul Revere
Paul Revere’s friend
a British soldier
a townsperson

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Answer:

A townsperson I believe

why is Mt. St. Helens known as an active volcano?

A) The Cascade Mountain Range in Washington is part of the Ring of Fire that contains over 160 active volcanoes.

B) Throughout history, Mt. St. Helens has been known to erupt regularly, causing the death of 56 people every year.

C) Volcanoes are active if they have erupted in the last 10,000 years, and Mt. St Helens erupted only a few decades ago, in 1980.

D) When Mt. St. Helens erupted in 1980, 56 people were killed and the surrounding landscape was changed forever.

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Answer: A) The Cascade Mountain Range in Washington is part of the Ring of Fire that contains over 160 active volcanoes.

Explanation:

The answer is A, the Cascade Mountain Range in Washington is part of the Ring of Fire that contains over 160 active volcanoes.

The Most Dangerous Game
Write a 5 sentence summary of this story.
I’ll will give you 5 stars
PLEASE HELP

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Rainsford and his partner Whitney are on their way to the Amazon rainforest when Rainsford hears a gunshot and falls over the rail of his yacht. He swims to ship trap island where there is a chateau inhabited by General Zaroff and his giant servant Ivan. Rainsford meets zaroff and is given a choice: be hunted in the jungle for 3 days and leave if you survive or be whipped to death by Ivan;
Rainsford agrees to being hunted. Rainsford is hunted, and on the third day he jumps off a cliff into the water. Zaroff believes rainsford is dead but is later surprised by Rainsford returning and is killed by Rainsford in his bedroom.

You are NOT part of the digital world when you use a texting app.
O True
False

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the answer is false

How might the title of a literary work help you examine its purpose? A. The title identifies who the main characters are. B. The title tells readers what they should expect to see in the plot. C. The title always indicates the tone of the work. D. The title often suggests the message the author wants to send.

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Answer:

i think it is A

Explanation:

it iss A because i want to to eb A

16 points :)

ONLY IF YOU READ HARRY POTTER!

philosophers stone

what lesson did harry potter learn? how did he change?

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Answer:

HI so One of the morals of the story is that you never know what you are capable of until you try. Harry was faced with extraordinary circumstances, and he was able to rise to the challenge. He found reserves of bravery within himself, as well as special abilities. Harry Potter had no idea that he was a wizard, of course

Explanation:

Answer:

Harry learned that people aren't always as they seem, with Snape and Professor Quirrell. He also learned the bonds of friendship.

Explanation:

please help me with this​

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pretty sure it's the first one

Explanation:

id put the first one just bcos the central idea is the Juno NASA spacecraft

What is the author's MAIN purpose for including Luis Gomez's story in the article, Everyone deserves a chance. DACA should be preserved?

Question 3 options:

to provide an example of how DACA has benefited an immigrant


to show why having a driver's license is important to Americans


to explain why immigrants should have the same rights as citizens


to demonstrate how many people have used DACA to gain legal status

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Answer:

That everyone deserve a chance to do the right thing that they need to do

Explanation:

Because if you don't have a driver license as a american you are not following the rules in your country and are maybe get in the jail or paid for it that's why you need to do the rules as a american.

Answer:

A) to provide an example of how DACA has benefited an immigrant

Explanation:

I just did the quiz


Why is it important to include a person's title when developing a reference sheet?

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Answer: In my opinion, I think it's 'cause So that the company will see if your reference is someone related to you or from your past job.

Answer:

It is important to include a person's title when developing a reference sheet because it gives credit to the person

Explanation:

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Highlight all of the independent clauses in the sentences below. Then write to identify each sentence as simple, compound, complex, or compound-complex. The fair setup began late in July, and it ended at the beginning of September. Tents kept the rides in great condition during extreme weather. When fairgoers bought tickets, they often purchased too many. Although some people got sick from riding, the extreme roller coaster was popular, and there was always a very long line. Tractor competitions are usually part of a larger show that everyone loves to watch.

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Answer:

The fair setup began late in July, and it ended at the beginning of September.    (compound)

Tents kept the rides in great condition during extreme weather.   (simple)

When fairgoers bought tickets, they often purchased too many.   (complex)

Although some people got sick from riding, the extreme roller coaster was popular, and there was always a very long line.    (compound-complex)

Tractor competitions are usually part of a larger show that everyone loves to watch.   (simple)

Explanation:

Read the following excerpt from Sullivan's article:
If you've ever taken a creative writing workshop, you've
been warned never to do this, pile up adjectives, interpose
descriptive terms between the reader's imagination and
the scene.
Which word best describes the style of this excerpt?
A. Exuberant
B. Elegiac
C. Instructional
D. Conversational

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Answer:

C. Instructional

Explanation:

The style of the given excerpt can be described as instructional. The author mentions instructions often given to the participants of creative writing workshops. He reminds them of what they're not supposed to do - they're not supposed to pile up adjectives.

The meaning of the adjective exuberant is full of energy, excitement, and cheerfulness. There is nothing exuberant about the given passage.

An elegy is a form of poetry that expresses sorrow or lamentation. When something is elegiac, it is related to an elegy in some way. The given excerpt has nothing to do with an elegy.

A text written in the conversational style mimics a conversation. It usually breaks the rules of grammar. As we can see, the given passage doesn't really remind us of a real-life conversation.

This is why the correct option is C.

Answer:

D

Explanation:

It's D I took the test.

explain the quote" whatever goes over the Devils back, is got to come under his belly"​

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Answer:

whatever you do thats bad will eventually come back to one way or another

Explanation:

"AJ is writing a paragraph with the following claim: Soccer is the most popular sport in the world."
A.) Soccer is the most watched sport on television.
B.)Soccer is a lot of fun.
C.)Playing soccer requires little equipment.
D.)Any type of ball can be used to play soccer.

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Answer:

A.)

Explanation:

What he is saying is mostly an opinion, but can also be a fact. If he is claiming that soccer is the most popular sport in the world, the most logical answer would be A.), as in it supports his claim the strongest.

"AJ is writing a paragraph with the following claim: Soccer is the most popular sport in the world is best reflected by the Soccer is the most watched sport on television. Thus the correct option is A.

What is Inference?

Inference in any literature piece refers to achieving the conclusion of any subject with the support of facts and evidence present in the particular piece of literature.

In the given case,  a claim is given, a claim mainly represents an idea or notion without providing evidence that the thing exists in the environment. Here the claim is Soccer is the most popular sport in the world.

To support the claim or to provide a more logical connection Option A  Soccer is the most watched sport on television which provides links between each other for interpretation.

Therefore, option A is appropriate.

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What is discrimination? Use in your own words. Give some examples.

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Answer:I would say that discrimination is cruelty to someone you trusted or someone who trusts you

Explanation:

I honestly don’t know what I’m saying I just want points

To maintain coherence and to achieve good organization, use transitional expressions.
True
False

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Answer:

the answer is trueeeeeee

Answer:

true

Explanation:

3) Find the complete subject and the simple subject in the sentence.

A new tropical wave has just entered the Gulf of Mexico.

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Answer:

A new tropical WAVE has just entered the Gulf of Mexico.

Explanation:

the sculptures pictured below come from two different historical peirods.

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Answer:

i cant see the pictures

Explanation:

In the following sentence identify the function of the infinitive (phrase). Is it too expensive to travel to Europe? function: .

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Answer:

It's an adverb

Explanation:

Answer:

Adverb

Explanation:

Can someone write like an 8 sentence paragraph about themselves I don't feel comfortable talking about myself or give me some ideas

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Answer:

sure

Explanation:

My name is (y/n) and I have three cats. I enjoy (your hobbies) and (your favorite food). It's the best! My favorite season is (yeah you get the idea), and I love that season because (  ). My family consists of (   ). My favorite song is (   ). My favorite color is (   ).

Answer:

try making up so white lies. some harmless lies.

Explanation:

example

my favorite show is ______ because ______, i like the plot and storyline of the show because _______ (add more to it if you need)

my favorite book is _____ by _____ because ______.

my favorite song by _______ is ________ because ______ (the lyrics are nice, its calming, it gives me past memories/vibes, ect.....)

hope that helps :))))

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