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Part B In the chart, show three examples of corrections you made from your edited draft. Enter your original text in the left column. In the middle column, identify the spelling, capitalization, or punctuation error that was made. Then enter your edited text in the right column. An example has been done for you.
Original Text Error Edited Text
But then I read about Release, I put the book down and tried to rationalize how they could do this with a clean conscience.
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But then I read about Release. I put the book down and tried to rationalize how they could do this with a clean conscience.
you have too do 3 more of these from an edited draft (doesn't matter the topic preferably non politics or social veiws) (more preferably something on science)
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QUESTION: What best describes the outcome of the Plessy v Ferguson case?
A. Segregation became legal under "separate but equal".
B. Segregation became illegal in the United States
C. The Supreme Court ruled that Segregation Laws violated the 14th Amendment.
Which lines of dialogue does the playwright include in Brighton Beach Memoirs to show Kate's viewpoint of her niece? Always studying, that one. She's gonna have some head on her shoulders. I just have this one edge to finish... Laurie, darling, help your Aunt Kate with the dishes. Blanche, that's enough sewing today. That's all I need is for you to go blind. No? Then who? Laurie? Aunt Blanche? Did you ever see them on skates?
Answer:
Always studying, that one. She's gonna have some head on her shoulders.
Explanation:
Answer:
Always studying that one, She’s gonna have some head on her shoulders
Explanation:
Write an informative essay in which you explain your vision of a utopia. Describe three aspects of your utopia using supporting details. What is the topic of the essay? What is the purpose of the essay?
Answer:
My topic of the essay = Utopia as an imperfect world
Purpose = to depict the actual reality of world
Explanation:
In an ideal universe, my utopia does not arise; the explanation for this is because I assume that there's no such phenomenon as a perfect environment. There are peaceful environments, and there are harmonious worlds, but not a complete universe. If this is such a flawless universe, there would be no need, as there is today, for change and discoveries. Content is the individuals who occupy my universe.
All their desires are fulfilled by them, and they fulfil the expectations of their culture. All is functioning. It should be evident the requirement for someone always to function. And they exile someone who would not function for the sake of their culture.
Answer:
What is the topic of the essay?
✔ my vision of the perfect society
What is the purpose of the essay?
✔ to inform readers of my idea of a utopia
What modern-day stories borrow elements of Phaethon's Ride?
What is a good introduction for the Steve Jobs essay. for the 6th grade
Answer:
Paul Jobs was raised in Germantown, Wisconsin and became a Coast Guard in World War II. He made a bet with his friends that he would be able to find a wife within two weeks. He met Clara Hagopian, who was born in New Jersey after her parents fled the Turks in Armenia, and the couple was engaged within ten days. Clara realized that she could not have children, so the married couple looked at adoption (Issacson 28-29). Joanna Schieble was a graduate student at the University of Wisconsin. She lived within a strict household where her father was extremely strict about dating. When Joanna met Abdulfattah Jandali, a Muslim teaching assistant from Syria, her father threatened to disown her. She went with Abdulfattah to Syria and two months later when they returned, found out she was pregnant. Keeping the baby and abortion were not options the couple considered. When Joanna found out the adoptive couple were Paul and Clara Jobs, she made them promise that they would keep a college fund for the baby. Steve Jobs was born on February 24th, 1955. After some reluctance, Joanna signed the adoption papers and gave Steve Jobs to his new parents (Issacson 30-31).Steve Jobs knew from a young age that he was adopted. Many of his close friends believe that the awareness that he was given up as a baby made him into the independent person he grew up to be (Issacson 32). Jobs has said that he knows people say that the reason why he has worked so hard was because he wanted his biological parents to want him back, but Steve said that is not true. (Issacson 33). Steve’s father is the person that introduced Steve to technology. Paul worked on cars often, and although Steve did not like to get his hands dirty, he loved doing whatever he could to help. Getting, Sara, and Karin Swainey. "First Graders with iPads? Find out how two teachers took on the challenge of improving elementary reading, achieved surprising success with their youngest at-risk readers, and learned some interesting things along the way." Learning & Leading with Technology August 2012: 24+. General Reference Center GOLD. Web. 11 December 2013. Isaacson, Walter. Steve Jobs. New York: Simon & Schuster, 2011. Print. Mills, Elinor, and Bob Wallace. “Jobs is back: Apple buys NeXT for $400M.” Computerworld. 23 December 1996: 8. General Reference Center GOLD.
Explanation:
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Imagine you are Dad from Passage A. The owner of the company
wants to introduce holiday work experience for more young people.
You have been asked to present a report to the owner of the
company following your son’s experience.
Write the report.
In your report you should comment on:
• the challenges faced by Andrew and what you hoped he would
gain from his six weeks at the factory
• how different staff members treated Andrew
• what you have learned about the thoughts and feelings of the
people who work at the company.
Base your report on what you have read in Passage A, but be careful
to use your own words. Address each of the three bullet points.
Begin your report, ‘Summer work experience for young people « ’
Write about 250 to 350 words.
Answer:
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When the wedding guests saw the skimpy portions that were being served for dinner, they ____ at the ___ tackiness of the meal
Answer:
scoffed, cheap
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Answer: it very simple basiclly you need to put the meant of the word and give it a reason why you chose that word
Explanation:
Audience:the assembled spectators or listeners at a public event, such as a play, movie, concert, or meeting.
reason : to explain etc
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Conditinal Sentences: Second Conditional Complete the sentences by putting the verbs into the correct form.
1. If we_____ a yacht, we____ the seven seas. (have, sail)
2. If he_____more time, he_____karate. (have, learn)
3. If they_____ their father, he ____very angry. (tell, be)
4. She______ a year in the USA if it_______ easier to get a green card. (spend, be)
5. If I_____ on a lonely island, I_____ around naked all day. (live run)
6. We____ you if we_____ how. (help know)
7 My brother _____a sports car if he______ the money. (buy, have)
8. If I ______better I ______the cinema with you. (feel, go)
9. If you______by bike more often, you so______ flabby. (go, not be)
10. She_______to you if she____ mad at you. (not talk, be)
Answer:.
1. If we__had___ a yacht, we_could sail_ the seven seas. (have, sail)
2. If he__had___more time, he__could learn___karate. (have, learn)
3. If they__told___ their father, he __would be__very angry. (tell, be)
4. She__could spend____ a year in the USA if it_were__ easier to get a green card. be= subjunctive case
5. If I_were to live_ on a lonely island, I_would run___ around naked all day. (Subjunctive)
OR If I lived... I could run around...
6. We_would help___ you if we_knew__ how. (help know)
7 My brother _would buy____a sports car if he_had_ the money. (buy, have)
8. If I felt___better I __would go____the cinema with you. (feel, go) or If I feel better, I will go to the cinema with you.
9. *If you_went_by bike more often, you _ would not be_so flabby. (go, not be) OR If you were to go by bike...
10. She_would not talk___to you if she_were_ mad at you. (not talk, be) (another subjunctive case example
Explanation: In general, use a conditional modal/auxiliary with the verb in the main clause. The verb in the "If-clause" will be in the (rare) subjunctive case, or in the past tense form of the verb.
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Answer:
No....that's plagiarism, it's better if you just try your best on it cause if you use someone else's essay, teachers use something to find how much plagirism did you use and you'll get a 0
What's the language technique called where you capitalize the start of every word in a sentence eg- Absolutely Every Last Detail. I WILL MARK BRAINLIEST
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Which BEST describes the technique used to develop the author's purpose?
A)
The author uses logic and provides examples to persuade readers to make
healthy choices for active living as they age.
B)
The author appeals to the readers' respect for authority and expertise by
providing multiple claims quoted by professionals with impressive
credentials.
The author uses word choices that evoke fear and a sense of uneasiness to
warn readers of the dangers of ignoring the advice to choose a healthy
lifestyle.
D)
The author appeals to the lighthearted nature of the readers by presenting
the somewhat silly and whimsical side of fitness and health through
humorous anecdotes.
Answer:
A
Explanation:
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Answer:
A) The author uses logic and provides examples to persuade readers to make healthy choices for active living as they age.
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Answer:
B
Explanation:
Circe's potion is most likely an evil spell. Hope this helps :)
Drag each label to the correct location on the image. Each label can be used more than once.
Match the figures of speech to the excerpts from Macbeth in which they appear.
1. personification
2. apostrophe
Answer:
Personification Apostrophe PersonificationExplanation:
In the first section, we can see that sleep was portrayed as something that was being murdered. Sleep is inanimate, it has no life and therefore cannot be killed, which is a condition that only happens to living beings. When this happens, we claim that the personification is being used.
In the second section we see that Lady Macbeth sees something that does not exist and speaks of something that is not there, as if she were. This is an example of an apostrophe, which is the figure of speech used when a speaker refers directly to something that does not exist or to someone who is dead as if he were alive.
In the third excerpt we see again the use of personification through the reference to the newborn baby who is without any clothes, completely naked.
TAKEAWAY what will stick with you? (What does this mean?)
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Create a paragraph using the following words
Acquired , alterations, transfer , hazardous, overseeing, perplexed
Answer:
once upon a time there was a legendary dragon that acquired power through a legendary stone. though overseeing his rival, he can tell that he is not powerful enough to defeat him. thus meaning he must transfer his power to to a crystal. to make him immortal. but his rival could tell he was up to something he was overseeing him through a crystal ball. making a very dangerous and hazardous situation. different alliterations of these two have been made throughout centuries, many do change the story to have it perplexed.
Explanation:
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Write an essay in which you explain the advantages and disadvantages of both older and newer methods of transportation. Use evidence from both passages in your essay.
Answer and Explanation:
Transportation methods are an essential element for the construction of civilizations, as it allowed the movement of peoples, products and even allowed communication. Given this importance, it is not surprising how this element has evolved over the years.
Although we have very modern and fast means of transport, humanity has already been subjected to less modern means of transport with less technology. A major advantage of these means of transport is the environmental sustainability that they promoted. An example of this is the use of horses that older people used to get around. As horses did not need to burn fuel to move, they did not pollute the environment, but represented slow transport and could not take long trips without breaks and did not allow international travel.
With the advance of technology, industrialization and human needs, the means of transport have evolved, until reaching the means of transport that we currently have. The great advantage of these transport is the agility with which the trips are made and the lack of limited territory reached. We can go anywhere in the world with several different transportation options. However, this is done with the burning of fuels, which promotes a great deterioration of our environment, which is already very degraded.
Therefore, we can say that there is a challenge for the means of transport of the future. They must maintain or increase efficiency and agility, but decrease the need for fuel and environmental degradation. Thus we will have means of transport that are fast and committed to sustainability.
Question 1
Which thesis statement is written correctly?
Tornadoes are dangerous. They cause more monetary damage to communities than any other type of weather,
Tornadoes are dangerous because they cause more monetary damage to communities than any other type of weather,
For 100 points
After Stanton achieves her goal of becoming the top of her class, she's excited to share
the news with her father who says what?
Answer:
what book is this
Explanation:
Noah Henry told the others a funny story to pass the time.
Answer:
the joke was why did the chicken cross the road? to go get cooked
Explanation:
Wyatt and his parents were at the restaurant, waiting for their meals to be delivered. As
they waited, Wyatt's dad was pointing out the ten things he had done wrong during the football
game that afternoon Wyatt always dreaded this post-game ritual, where his dad, a retired
professional football player, listed everything he did wrong during the game. In fact, Wyatt's
dad was so focused on pointing out Wyatt's mistakes that he didn't immediately notice that a
boy and his father had approached the table
"I'm sorry to interrupt your meal, but I was wondering if I could have your autograph?"
the boy asked Wyatt's father.
"Of course, Buddy,' Wyatt's dad replied kindly 'What would you like me to sign?"
As the boy handed Wyatt's dad his baseball cap, the boy's father went on and on about
what a gifted football player his son was, and how proud he was of his son.
Boy, Wyatt thought to himself, that kid is so lucky It must be nice to have a father who
thinks you're great and doesn't point out every single mistake you make
They spoke for a few more minutes, until the servers arrived at Wyatt's table with their
food. After the boy and his father returned to their own table, Wyatt's father went right back
to critiquing his son's performance on the football field
When Jeff and his father returned to their own table, they discussed how friendly Mr.
Mathews had been Jeff's father began to tell Jeff about the unfortunate injury that resulted
in an early retirement for Mr. Mathews
Boy, Jeff thought to himself, that kid is so lucky It must be nice to have a father who
knows so much about football. I bet Mr. Mathews is able to give his son helpful pointers all the
time
Theme:
And what make you think that
Answer:
Other people might want what you have
Explanation:
Jeff wanted a father like Mr. Matthews while Wyatt wanted a father like Jeffs
2. I was
by my friend's response.
annoyed
crept
sparkled
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Answer:
annoyed
Explanation:
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Answer:
I was sparkled by my friend's response.
Write a short paragraph using propaganda techniques to convince people to buy a soda called Popsi Kola.
Answer:
Feeling thirsty? Need energy? Sick of monotonous works? Pause to take a sip of Popsi Kola. All of your weariness will run away in no time & you'll feel as energetic & fresh as ever! Number one soda of the market Popsi Kola is ready to meet your thirst. So, go & grab one right now & feel the chill !!
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Explanation:
It was kinda funny , tho. Was it helpful?
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Read the passage from Eleanor Roosevelt’s speech on the adoption of the Universal Declaration of Human Rights.
Likewise, my government has made it clear in the course of the development of the Declaration that it does not consider that the economic and social and cultural rights stated in the Declaration imply an obligation on governments to assure the enjoyment of these rights by direct governmental action. This was made quite clear in the Human Rights Commission text of article 23 which served as a so–called "umbrella" article to the articles on economic and social rights. We consider that the principle has not been affected by the fact that this article no longer contains a reference to the articles which follow it. This in no way affects our whole–hearted support for the basic principles of economic, social, and cultural rights set forth in these articles.
In giving our approval to the Declaration today it is of primary importance that we keep clearly in mind the basic character of the document. It is not a treaty; it is not an international agreement. It is not and does not purport to be a statement of law or of legal obligation. It is a Declaration of basic principles of human rights and freedoms, to be stamped with the approval of the General Assembly by formal vote of its members, and to serve as a common standard of achievement for all peoples of all nations.
Which particular group in the General Assembly audience is Roosevelt MOST LIKELY targeting in this passage?
A. those who think that the UDHR would be a coercive document
B. those who support making the UDHR a legal obligation
C. those who still do not support human rights for everyone
D. those who are in agreement with Roosevelt and her government
Answer:
C. those who still do not support human rights for everyone
Explanation:
Answer:
C. those who still do not support human rights for everyone
Explanation:
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Explanation:
1-C
2-B
3-B
4-A
5-C
6-A.............
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why is it important to follow intructions?
Answer: Following instructions are important because if you don't follow them like you're supposed to, in larger settings, it can cause chaos. Rules are put in place to avoid that.
Well it's important to follow instructions. Because you don't want to get caught in mistake you really don't want to end up with.
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“I love all the flavors of ice cream!” he shouted as he jumped up and down waiting for the ice cream truck to come. *
1 point
a. First Person
b. Third Person Limited
c. Third Person Omniscient
Answer:
b
Explanation:
Which of these is an example of irony from "The Open Window" by Saki?
A. Mr. Nuttel is supposed to be undergoing a nerve cure, but his nerves are worse after visiting Mrs. Sappleton.
B. Mr. Nuttel's sister gives him letters of introduction to some of the people who live in the town he visits.
C. Mr. Nuttel is annoyed that Mrs. Sappleton wasn't better prepared for the visit.
D. Mr. Nuttel is afraid of dogs because he was once chased into a cemetery by a pack of dogs.
E. Mrs. Sappleton is annoyed that Mr. Nuttel can only talk about his ailments.
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Answer:
a
Explanation:
ironic how hes getting nervous during a nerve cure
Irony is used frequently in Saki's short story “The Open Window.” When Vera's uncle arrives, the visitor leaves the house after Vera had told a visitor that her uncle is deceased. It states, “I hope Vera has been amusing you,” in paragraph 16 Thus, option A is correct.
What irony from “The Open Window” by Saki?In “The Open Window,” the situational irony is that Mr. Nuttel is supposed to heal in the peaceful countryside, but the encounter with Vera makes him feel even more terrified, to the point where he flees the house in anguish.
It is ironic that the two men resolve to put an end to a family dispute only to pass away soon after making up, leaving no one to see the conversation.
Therefore, Situational irony occurs when an assumption and a real-world occurrence directly contradict each other.
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