Proofread the paragraph. On the lines below, correct any run-on sentences or
mistakes in punctuation.

My father drove up to the theater I stepped out of the car. Would it be a great show?
Or would I forget all my lines? I had rehearsed every night, my sister had even helped
with the hardest scenes. Would all that hard work pay off? Some people waited at
the ticket booth others were going inside. My stomach felt like it was full of frogs but
T headed to the stage door anyway. The cast was counting on me I couldn't let them
down.

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Answer 1

Answer:

My father drove up to the theater. I stepped out of the car. Would it be a great show? Or would I forget all my lines? I had rehearsed every night, and my sister had even helped with the hardest scenes. Would all that hard work pay off? Some people waited at the ticket booth, while others were going inside. My stomach felt like it was full of frogs, but I headed to the stage door anyway. The cast was counting on me, and I couldn't let them  down.

Explanation:

Run-on sentences are sentences that consist of two or more incorrectly connected independent clauses. A common type of a run-on sentence is a comma splice, which occurs when independent clauses are connected only by a comma.

You can correct run-on sentences by adding a:

semicoloncomma and coordinating conjunction - The cast was counting on me, and I couldn't let them  down.comma and subordinating conjunction - Some people waited at the ticket booth, while others were going inside.

You can also divide the run-on sentence into two or more separate sentences: My father drove up to the theater. I stepped out of the car.


Related Questions

Can someone help? Struggling

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Answer:
First person

Explanation:
First person: the narrator is a character in the story/text (uses the words I, we, etc.)

Second person: the narrator is talking as if you’re the a character in the story/text (uses the word “you”)

Third person: the narrator is a spectator and comments on what happens in the story (uses the words they, he, she, etc.)

In the passage, we see that the narrator uses the word “I” to address themselves (“I said”, “I didn’t feel frightened”, “my arms”) implying that they are a character in the story. Therefore, the passage is written in first-person perspective.

I hope this helps! Please comment if you have any questions.

Answer: First person point of view

Explanation: First-person point of view uses the pronouns I, me, we and us.

Help me please answer this ?

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Answer:

the answer is C

Explanation:

how does the author's use of long compound and complex sentences is paragraph 3 affect the reader's perception of the event and characters in the passage

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Answer:

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With what would you start your question if you are looking for the date something happened?
a who
c. where
b. what
d. when

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Answer:

d when

Explanation:

Answer:

d) when

Explanation:

"when" refers to the time something happened. so this is correct.

FEAR PROMPTS TEENS TO ACT IMPULSIVELY

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Answer:

True

Explanation:

I wasn't completely sure what you were asking, so I thought that you were asking a true or false question. Fear prompts teens to act impuslively because if a teen fears something and they are cornered, per say, with that thing, they're going to try their hardest to get out of that situation, even if it means going stupid.

I hope this helps!

Book flipped: What type of music did Mr. Loski play back in the day?
A) Rock
B) Jazz
C) Metal
D) Country

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Answer:

A rock he played rock back in the day

The article is on commonlit its called “Cant we all just get along” PLEASE HELP

Which statement best
identifies the central idea of the text?

A. The effect of one living thing on
another depends on if their
relationship is harmful or
beneficial.

B. Relationships between animals are
usually violent because they fight
over food to survive.

C. TV companies make money by
showing the violent relationships
between animals.

D. It would be best if all living things
only had symbiotic relationships
with each other.

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Answer:

The answer is A

Explanation:

please is for right now​

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Answer:

1- Lily and Sean are not on vacation.

2-Ben isn't hungry now

Lily and Sean Are not Going on Vacation.

Ben isn’t Hungry Right now.

My Mother is Not a Teacher.

I’m not at the Cinema.

Is it About to Rain Today?

Are the Books Heavy.

Are we Poor?

The kitchen isn’t Clean.

Which type of pronoun is hers in the sentence the poster about the planets is hers?

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Answer:

Possessive pronoun.

Explanation:

According to the question, the sentence is "the poster about the planet is hers".

The pronoun "hers" shows possession or ownership.

A possessive pronoun shows that something belongs to someone and it can come in different forms.

match the root or affix with its meaning.​

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Answer:

Ultra: beyond/extreme

-Ic: of or pertaining to an action

-Ive: relating to or belonging to

Omni: all

What does it take to survive and thrive in highschool

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Answer:

My friend says it living HELL! But she told me to get an organizer and plan my classes so prepared for anything

Explanation:

Answer:

Have a smaller group of friends when you try and be friends with everyone then you have toxic relationships

Also do the homework and study

Explanation:

Nick says that he was curious to see Myrtle, Tom’s mistress, but he had no desire to meet her. Explain Nick’s feelings. Note when he has similar ambivalent feelings throughout the novel.

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nick is depressed he doesn’t

Example of a monologue

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Answer:A speech that is given directly to the audience or another character. For example, a scene that captures a president's speech to a crowd exhibits a dramatic monologue that is both lengthy and important to the story's plot line.

Explanation:When you write a monologue it's used to speak for an audience.

Which sentence contains the best example of hyperbole?
A. Sunlight shone through holes in the decaying roof.
B. The sun made a brief appearance, just to say hi.
C. Luxembourg is the greatest country in the world.
D. After school today, we're going to have serious fun.

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Answer:

It's "C. Luxembourg is the greatest country in the world."

i need help please try your best

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Answer:

I think (A)

Explanation:

Try looking for better answers but i think its A because she seems to be very self aware an knows what she is doing. In this part it does not say anything about being sad for not being like here lovely daughters, in fact doesnt talk about her daughters in here. And for the last one it doesnt say that she is mistaken as a man either.

(WILL GIVE BRAINLEST)
Select the letter of the CORRECTLY written sentence.

a.
My wife and I argue all the time, I like action-adventure films, but she prefers dramas.

b.
My wife and I argue all the time; I like action-adventure films, she prefers dramas.

c.
My wife and I argue all the time; I like action-adventure films, but she prefers dramas.

d.
My wife and I argue all the time. I like action-adventure films. But she prefers dramas.

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Answer:

My wife and I argue all the time, I like action-adventure films, but she prefers dramas.

Explanation:

who is rich on adopt me or plays among us

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Answer:

i play both LOL

Explanation:

Answer:

first this is not a question second i play among us

Explanation:

Which is the central idea of the text battle of bionics

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This question is incomplete. Here's the complete question.

Read the article 'Battle of the Bionics,' by Steve Murray (MUSE Magazine October 2016)

Which is the central idea of the text battle of bionics.

Answer:

The central idea is that the Cybathlon is more than a competition because it aims to promote the development of new engineering approaches to help people with physical disabilities while also creating awareness about them.

Explanation:

That´s why “Redefining Ability,” according to the author, is a slogan that perfectly expresses the essence of this event.

What is a thesis for an essay?

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Answer:

he thesis statement is the sentence that states the main idea of a writing assignment and helps control the ideas within the paper. It is not merely a topic. It often reflects an opinion or judgment that a writer has made about a reading or personal experience.

Explanation:

A thesis statement is essentially a short summary sentence placed at the end of the first paragraph(the introduction). You introduce your points that you will talk about in the essay in your thesis.

PLEASE HELP, MANY POINTS!!!!

Find the claim


From On Being a Cripple / Nancy Mairs

First, the matter of semantics. I am a cripple. I choose this word to name me. I choose this word to name me. I choose from among several possibilities, the most common of which are "handicapped" and "disabled." I made the choice a number of years ago, without thinking, unaware of my motives for doing so. Even now, I’m not sure what those motives are, but I recognize that they are complex and not entirely flattering. People- crippled or not- wince at the word "cripple," as they do not "handicapped" or "disabled." Perhaps I want them to wince. I want them to see me as a tough customer, one to whom the fates/gods/viruses have not been kind, but who can face the brutal truth of her existence squarely. As a cripple, I swagger.

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Answer:

From "On Being A Cripple" by Nancy Mairs

The claim is "I am a cripple."

Explanation:

This claim by Nancy is an assertion by her that something is. Usually, as Nancy is making the declaration, she does not provide any evidence to support her affirmation. This is because the readers of this story cannot ascertain why Nancy concludes that she is crippled. If some evidence is given, the claim remains subjective as it is the narrator's personal opinion. After all, she can still claim that she is divinely and extremely blessed in her physical condition.

Nancy Mairs (1986) wrote this short story to question the imprecise descriptions that society has been coining to label some people who are not like others in physical look, as if lessening the truth or bluntness about a person's condition could lessen the pains. For Nancy, she disagrees totally. Instead, she finds meaning and humor on being described as a cripple, the plain truth about her physical condition. She states that she is simply physically crippled. No euphemism should be intended.

Even as I am checking my write-up on this issue, it is being reported as "sensitive" instead of "vulgar." This shows that our society is relegating truth to niceties, just to pander to the sensibilities of others.

Create a properly formatted works cited page for a research paper about the dangers of cell phone use on the road. Follow the MLA citation format, and make sure to correctly italicize each citation. For the purpose of this activity, it is not necessary to observe the MLA rules for indentation. Use the six sources provided to support the research paper.

Select the link below to view the provided sources.

SOURCES: Click Here

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Answer:

Source 1: Stockwell, Jamie." Phone Use Faulted in Collision." , December 6, 2000: B1. Print.

Source 2: Haughney, Christine. "Taking Phones Out of Drivers’ Hands." , November 5, 2000: A8. Print

Source 3: Sundeen, Matt. "Cell Phones and Highway Safety: 2000 State Legislative Update" , . December 15, 2000. Web. February 27, 2014.

Source 4: "Patti Pena’s Letter to Car Talk" ., , , . January 1, 2000. Web. January 10, 2014.

Source 5: Farmers Insurance Group. "New Survey Shows Drivers Have Had ‘Close Calls’ with Cell Phone Users." . , May 8, 2000.  Web. March 1, 2014.

Source 6: Violanti, M. John. Cellular Phones and Fatal Traffic Collisions. Los Angeles, CA: Accident Analysis and Prevention, 1998. Print.

Explanation:

This is what I did for that short writing. I do not know if it's right so use at own risk.

Answer:Source 1: Stockwell, Jamie." Phone Use Faulted in Collision." , December 6, 2000: B1. Print.

Source 2: Haughney, Christine. "Taking Phones Out of Drivers’ Hands." , November 5, 2000: A8. Print

Source 3: Sundeen, Matt. "Cell Phones and Highway Safety: 2000 State Legislative Update" , . December 15, 2000. Web. February 27, 2014.

Source 4: "Patti Pena’s Letter to Car Talk" ., , , . January 1, 2000. Web. January 10, 2014.

Source 5: Farmers Insurance Group. "New Survey Shows Drivers Have Had ‘Close Calls’ with Cell Phone Users." . , May 8, 2000.  Web. March 1, 2014.

Source 6: Violanti, M. John. Cellular Phones and Fatal Traffic Collisions. Los Angeles, CA: Accident Analysis and Prevention, 1998. Print.

Explanation: mark me as brainliest

Read the sentence.
Which word signals that two things are being
compared?
Both are countries located in South America.
abel
both
O are
O in
located
Mark this and return

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Answer: Both

Reason: both is saying that they are both related in some way
Hope I helped

How do you chunk the text We ate the children last

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Answer:

huh?????

Explanation:

im confused................

I have no clue what chunk means care to explain

What was your reaction when you read the first line of The Nickel Boys? For reference, the line is "Elwood received the best gift of his life on Christmas Day 1962, even if the ideas it put into his head were his undoing".


Which aspects of the first line inspire interest in Elwood, the novel’s protagonist?


What aspects of this line inspire mystery?


What is the main word or phrase within the first line that you would like to have explained by someone who could unpack it? Why?


Who might be able to explain it further and why?


What possibilities exist in relation to Whitehead's use of this word or phrase within the novel’s first line?


Which three of these possibilities do you judge to be the most likely and why?

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Answer:

Find the answers and explanations below.

Explanation:

1. The aspects of the line that inspire interest in Elwood include

a. The best gift of his life. One wonders what the best gift could be and its importance to him.

b. ...even if the ideas it put into his head were his undoing. The reader might also wonder what the ideas were and why it would cause Elwood's undoing.

2. Mysterious things are unknown and hard to explain. The best gift of his life is mysterious because the reader has no idea of what that gift could be because not much is known about the protagonist. The ideas in his head which would cause his undoing are also mysterious.

3. The phrase I would want to be explained to me is; The best gift of his life. When I know what that gift is, it would help me understand the personality of Elwood and why he had ideas in his head on receiving the gift.

4. The author can explain it further because he knows the qualities of the characters involved in the story.

5. One possibility could be that the gift has a major significance in the story.

Another possibility could be that the gift promoted an ideology that the protagonist holds dear.

The use of the phrase might have also been to whet the reader's interest in the story.

6. I think that the last reason is most likely. Seeing that the reader is not yet acquainted with the character, the mystery surrounding the best gift would make him wonder what that gift was. He would also want to find out by reading more of the story.

Help please I due today

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Answer:

i believe it is the purple one, or the one on the left, sorry if i was wrong <3<3<3

Explanation:

How did you integrate information from the podcasts and the news article to build your understanding of people’s experiences with race and ethnicity? Why is it important to hear people’s personal experiences with race and ethnicity?

R restate
A Answer the question
C Cite text
E Explain

I integrate information from the podcasts and the news article to build my understanding of people’s experiences with race and ethnicity by ;

It's also important to hear people’s personal experiences with race and ethnicity because ;

-I have to use the R.A.C.E. method to answer these questions.

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Answer: Wish you the best of luck it is so long not for free point on my life and what I believe in

Explanation:Wish luck 100%

Assessment - Perform Graphics Designing Using Ad Illustrator

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Answer:

h t t p s : / / w w w . thebalancecareers.com/graphic-design-skills-list-2062400

Explanation:

I searched it up hopefully it helps. :)

(I spaced it because it wouldnt let me send.)

Read the excerpt from an adaptation of "To Build a Fire."

As he turned to go on, he spat speculatively. There was a sharp, explosive crackle that started him. He spat again, and again, in the air, before it could fall to the

snow, the spittle crackled. He knew that at fifty below spittle crackled on the snow, but this spittle had crackled in the air. Undoubtedly it was colder than fifty

below-how much colder he did not know. But the temperature did not matter. He was bound for the old claim on the left fork of Henderson Creek, where the

boys were already

What technique does the author use to characterize the man?

A. The author uses direct characterization to describe the man's personality

B. The author uses direct characterization to explain the man's fears,

C. The author uses indirect characterization to reveal the man's attitude,

D. The author uses indirect characterization to reveal the man's hopes,

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Answer:

C. The author uses indirect characterization to reveal the man's attitude,

Explanation:

Indirect characterization is the type of characterization where features of a character is not directly revealed by the narrator but readers infer what the character is like through his words, thoughts, or feelings.

Therefore, the technique that the author uses to characterize the man is the use of indirect characterization to reveal the man's attitude

Answer:

C

Explanation:

Help me out plz. I’m struggling.

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Answer:

third person

Explanation:

he, his,

Third person.

Indirect pronouns, such as "he/she/it/they," indicate third person.

First person uses "I/we."

Second person uses "you."

What is most closely the meaning of assured in the following passage (paragraph 39) letter from birmingha jail

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Answer:

A. adjective/confident

Explanation:

Dr. Martin Luther King is confident in the reason for his tears.

The thing which is most closely the meaning of assured in the following passage (paragraph 39) letter from Birmingham jail is:

A. adjective/confident

Based on the complete text, we can see that Martin Luther is giving an emotional speech about the things which he faced in the Birmingham Jail based on racial segregation.

Confident tone

This refers to the use of words that show that a person is sure of what he is saying.

Read more about adjectives here:

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